The Bridge - Chapter 1
****************** The Bridge By Kronos ****************** NOTE: This follows almost directly after the story I wrote called The Abyss, so, it occurs a few weeks after Heath's arrival and about a week...
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I went to go read the Abyss, only to realize that I had read it once previously (back before I joined the board) and I have to say that I love that story. It is so full of emotion- it slowly...
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Nice to see you back. You haven't lost any descriptive power. You have us there with Jarrod watching Nick and Heath fight. We even felt Jarrod's elation and amusement. Thanks for sharing this. Can't...
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Yay! You've made my day when I saw this new story from you - you don't know how much I've missed the Christinaness. This action-packed "fluff" is a great start and I am so looking forward to more of...
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I loved Jarrod's twisting emotions. Now, who are Nick and Heath fighting with and who is going to pay Harry for the destruction? Hurry back Christina !!! Laura
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My favorite part was Jarrod leaning against the bar, hat pushed back, catching a glimpse of his grin in the mirror fragment still hanging on the wall...a very vivid image as he relaxed despite the...
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Nice start to a follow up on the Abyss, which I read again. Good to see Nick and Heath 'working' together. And I. too, love Jarrod's reaction to the fight, calmly downing a whiskey.
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It is SO good to have both you and Heidi back in the Valley, Christina! This is delightful. I loved the Jarrod POV and his relaxed attitude to his brothers and their shenanigans.
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I enjoyed the beginning very much. NOthing like a good brawl to set te tone, esp. when new brothers are on the same side. I liked Jarrod'sheart pounding and dry mouth as he walked for the bar. And I...
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Nice bit of suspense as Jarrod jumps to the wrong conclusion: Jarrod stopped on the street outside, realizing he was terrified. Sweat had gathered on his forehead and ran freely down his back. His...
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I remembered your previous story Abyss (the fight - unforgettable) and I could understand why Jarrod was in panic, at first! Glad to see you back with the continuation! Hurry back, Vivian
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Like Jarrod, I'm relieved it wasn't Nick and Heath taking each other apart. But, what was the fight about?! Debbie
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I just love Jarrod just taking in the fight! Now what or who are his brothers fighting for? Hurry back!
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I can't believe you call this a "fluff" piece, when it is so riveting! Can't wait to see where you're going with this. I am happy to re-read the Abyss and it put me in the perfect frame of mind to...
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Jarrod ever practical - protect the suit! Now what was the fight all about? Beautifully written.
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Jarrod felt a moment of dizziness. Disorientation. Could it be? Again? He started moving, slowly at first and then starting a jog as he saw Harold gesturing for him to hurry. Jarrod looked down the...
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Great to see you writing again Christine. Now hurry back with the next chapter. Loved Jarrod happy to look on.
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OUAH!!! I can see the great fight and Jarrod's smile, seeing that his brothers were side by side. Well written. Hurry back
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